Above are the two photos I showed in the critique. My own explaination for the top one is relationship with boyfriend, 2nd one is about loneliness, boredom, mimic murder scene, life is more horrible than murder.

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Metaphor.
Les Krims 1972, Stack O’Wheat Murders, fake crime scene photos. I don’t like them, I don’t get it.
Murder or Death?
Presentation: white paint on frames(great idea, might try), white masonite panel (i don’t think this works), plexi or aluminum(going to), refer to Ian Lemmonds. My comprimised result is floating frame.
bigger scale
What is worse than murder? Are you saying murder is common in pop culture? NO
read Howard Zin, historian. Democracy and Disobedience. How do we accept when there is so much disorder in the world.
Are you talking about victim or killer?
Do we honor the victim? Are you sympathetic? Are you apathy?
Wahol’s car crash
“Death of Marat” This leads to my new picture.

commented on dustpan and shoes color
why pinching nipple? Like a game
An extension of shutter.
Does shock transfer to pleasure?
a metaphor for psychological annulation.
Why is he wearing a wig?
sexual ambiguity. Why do we have 2 genders? Why do we have another gender?
do you write? no. but I draw storyboard for 60% of my photos. interested in film
exasperation, exhaustion, a terrible conversation.
don’t look like murder. Towel was blood.
theatric
have you been looking at crime scene photos? yes
go to rotten.com. I did, uh~~~~~
Damian Hirst love it.
write ideas so they are less elusive
present more than one photo- perhaps 70 would be a good number.
roles of sex, roles of power.
and thats the first critique I’ve ever ended with the word hermaphrodite.